use correct grammar(simple present

use correct grammar(simple present tense, adjective, subject verb agreement
several errors of tense, adjective, subject verb agreement etc, but meaning not obscured
major errors of tense, adjective, subject-verb agreement, etc, and meaning obscured
no mastery of sentence construction and dominated by errors

very little errors of mechanics
few errors of mechanics, but meaning not obscured
many errors of mechanic and meaning pbscured
dominated by errors of mechanics

Hasil (Bahasa Indonesia) 1:

menggunakan tata (bentuk sekarang sederhana, kata, subjek kata kerjabeberapa kesalahan tegang, kata sifat, subjek kata kerja dll, tetapi tidak mengaburkan maknabesar kesalahan tegang, kata sifat, subjek-kata kerja, dll, dan makna dikaburkantidak ada penguasaan konstruksi kalimat dan didominasi oleh kesalahansangat sedikit kesalahan mekanika beberapa kesalahan Mekanika, tetapi tidak mengaburkan maknabanyak kesalahan mekanik dan makna pbscured didominasi oleh kesalahan mekanika