On saturday,October 23,l went to sa

On saturday,October 23,l went to sarah's birthday party.l was very excited.l went there with george and tina.We wore fancy dress because it was a fancy dress party. l wore a ghost costume. Tina became xena,the warrior princes,and george was a vampire.
The party started at 7 p.m.First.l,we sang"Happy Birthday".Then,sarah blew the candles.After that,we ate some food and drank coke.
Later on,wi did some games.Everybody enjoyed them.l cheered so hard that l nearly lost my voice.While we were playing"Hide and seek",the linghts suddenly went out.Some girls screamed because they were afraid of the drank.Fortunatenly,it didn't take long.In ten minutes,the linght went on again,and we continued of the game.
Before the party was over,the MC announced the best costume of the party.George got the first prize.He looked so happy.
Finally,my dad arrived to take me home.l mass so tired,but happy.

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Pada hari Sabtu, Oktober 23, l pergi ke ulang tahun sarah party.l sangat excited.l pergi ke sana dengan george dan tina. Kami memakai kostum karena itu adalah pesta kostum. l mengenakan kostum hantu. Tina menjadi xena, warrior Pangeran, dan george adalah vampir. Partai mulai di 7 p.m.First.l,we menyanyikan "Happy Birthday". Kemudian, sarah meniup lilin. Setelah itu, kami makan makanan dan minum coke. Kemudian wi melakukan beberapa permainan. Semua orang menikmati them.l bersorak sangat keras l yang hampir kehilangan suara saya. Sementara kami sedang bermain "Sembunyikan dan berusaha", linghts tiba-tiba keluar. Beberapa gadis berteriak karena mereka takut minum. Fortunatenly, tidak perlu waktu lama. Dalam sepuluh menit, linght pergi lagi, dan kami melanjutkan permainan. Sebelum pesta sudah berakhir, MC mengumumkan kostum terbaik partai. George mendapat hadiah pertama. Dia tampak begitu bahagia. Akhirnya, ayah saya tiba untuk membawa saya home.l massa sangat lelah, tetapi senang.