On saturday,October 23,l went to sa

On saturday,October 23,l went to sarah's birthday party.l was very excited.l went there with george and tina.We wore fancy dress because it was a fancy dress party. l wore a ghost costume. Tina became xena,the warrior princes,and george was a vampire.
The party started at 7 p.m.First.l,we sang"Happy Birthday".Then,sarah blew the candles.After that,we ate some food and drank coke.
Later on,we did some games.Everybody enjoyed them.l cheered so hard that l nearly lost my voice.While we were playing"Hide and seek",the lights suddenly went out.Some girls screamed because they were afraid of the drank.Fortunately,it didn't take long.In ten minutes,the lights went on again,and we continued of the game.
Before the party was over,the MC announced the best costume of the party.George got the first prize.He looked so happy.
Finally,my dad arrived to take me home.l mass so tired,but happy.

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Pada hari Sabtu, 23 Oktober l pergi ke sarah ulang tahun party.l sangat excited.l pergi ke sana dengan george dan tina.We mengenakan kostum karena itu adalah pesta kostum. l mengenakan kostum hantu. Tina menjadi xena, para pangeran prajurit, dan george adalah vampir.
Partai dimulai pada 7 pmFirst.l, kami menyanyikan "Happy Birthday" .Kemudian, sarah meniup candles.After itu, kami makan beberapa makanan dan minum Coke.
Kemudian , kami melakukan beberapa games.Everybody menikmati them.l bersorak begitu keras bahwa l hampir kehilangan voice.While saya kami bermain "Sembunyikan dan mencari", lampu tiba-tiba gadis out.Some menjerit karena mereka takut dari drank.Fortunately, tidak butuh waktu long.In sepuluh menit, lampu melanjutkan lagi, dan kami terus permainan.
Sebelum pesta usai, MC mengumumkan kostum terbaik dari party.George mendapat pertama prize.He tampak begitu bahagia .
Akhirnya, ayah saya tiba untuk membawa saya home.l massa sangat lelah, tapi senang.