i joined the traditional dance comp

i joined the traditional dance competition in jakarta last year . i represented my junior high school . it was my biggest competition . i practiced hard with my teacher for a month .
we also prepared the best costume we had . we only had one day in jakarta . we went there by plane. we left at 6 a.m and arrived in jakarta at 7 a.m we took a taxi to take us to the place where the competition was held .it took an hour to ger there . there were already some participants when we arrived the competition would start in an hour.

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i bergabung dengan kompetisi tari tradisional di jakarta tahun lalu. i diwakili SMP saya. itu kompetisi terbesar saya. i berlatih keras dengan guru saya selama sebulan.
kami juga menyiapkan kostum terbaik yang kami punya. kami hanya memiliki satu hari di jakarta. kami pergi ke sana dengan pesawat. kami meninggalkan pukul 6 pagi dan tiba di jakarta pukul 7 pagi kami mengambil taksi untuk membawa kami ke tempat di mana kompetisi diadakan .it butuh satu jam untuk ger ada. sudah ada beberapa peserta ketika kami tiba kompetisi akan mulai dalam satu jam.